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Post by Kamikaze87 Thu Feb 16, 2012 5:17 am

I created a story today and dedicated it to Crash Zone. This was created purely from my imagination. Enjoy!

STORY SUMMARY:

Captured... Knocked out... Interrogated...
Your mission was compromised...
Nothing went right...
And now...
Escape, is just a dream...

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Post by Rhox Thu Feb 16, 2012 5:26 am

o.o kewl i wanna see part 2 :p

btw shouldnt the poll be single choice
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Post by Acid Thu Feb 16, 2012 6:32 am

Well it dint realy couth my eye. I think it was somewhat good. I loved how u discribed the russian solder. But the fact that in the espionage businiss people use code names. So saying ur mentor did not have a codename is kinda strange. If by any chance that persons name was sayed by the main character they may get to him. So id recomend u change the mentors name to a codename. (BTW MY THOUTHS AND SUGESTIOS) PLZ DO NOT RAGE.
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