The Interrogation | Short Story by Kami
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The Interrogation | Short Story by Kami
I created a story today and dedicated it to Crash Zone. This was created purely from my imagination. Enjoy!
STORY SUMMARY:
Captured... Knocked out... Interrogated...
Your mission was compromised...
Nothing went right...
And now...
Escape, is just a dream...
Click me to download! Remember to submit feeback!
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The Interrogation | Short Story by Brian Nguyen is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
STORY SUMMARY:
Captured... Knocked out... Interrogated...
Your mission was compromised...
Nothing went right...
And now...
Escape, is just a dream...
Click me to download! Remember to submit feeback!
COPYWRIGHT NOTICE:
The Interrogation | Short Story by Brian Nguyen is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
Re: The Interrogation | Short Story by Kami
o.o kewl i wanna see part 2 :p
btw shouldnt the poll be single choice
btw shouldnt the poll be single choice
Re: The Interrogation | Short Story by Kami
Well it dint realy couth my eye. I think it was somewhat good. I loved how u discribed the russian solder. But the fact that in the espionage businiss people use code names. So saying ur mentor did not have a codename is kinda strange. If by any chance that persons name was sayed by the main character they may get to him. So id recomend u change the mentors name to a codename. (BTW MY THOUTHS AND SUGESTIOS) PLZ DO NOT RAGE.
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